PED231:Human Development & Motor Learning: Writing the Paper

Although an outline is not required for this particular assignment, there are several reasons why creating one will be helpful:

• Serves as a great brainstorming activity
• Identifies main points of your argument
• Helps you organize your research material
• Show potential strengths and weaknesses in your argument

In other words, a well-structured detailed outline is a great bridge between the reading and understanding of your sources and the written draft of your paper. Without a good outline that gap is hard to bridge!

• Step #1: List the points and research you want to include in your paper 

   
• Step #2: Create a working (tentative) thesis 

   
• Step #3: Craft an argument that proves your thesis 

   
• Step #4: Include the evidence from your research that proves your point 

   
• Step #5: Add appropriate in-text citations to your evidence 

   

Confused by the formatting of outlines? Here's an example of what one might look like.

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Organizing shouldn't just happen before you start writing. Once you've got a draft done use the color blocking technique to check your balance and flow. First things first...attack your draft with a highlighter. Use the color pattern below (or substitute your own faves) to get started.

• Pink--thesis
• Green--introductory elements and/or conclusion
• Orange--research/quotes
• Blue--Writer's commentary/voice  

So once we apply this color blocking to your paper, it might look a little like this:

Introduction and Thesis:

  XXXXXXXXX XXXXXXX XXXX XXXXX XXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXX XXXX XXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX  XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXX  XXXXXXX XXXXXXXX XXXXXX XXXXX XXXXXX XXXXX XX XXXXX XXXXXXX X XXXXXX XXXXX XXX XXXXXX XXXXX XXX XXXX XXX XX XXX XXXXX XXXXXXXX XXXXXX XXXXXXX

Body:

  XXXXXXXX XX XXX XXXX XXXXXXX XXXX XXX XXXXXXXX XXX XXXXXXXX XXXXXXX XXXXX X XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXX XXXXXX XXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXX XXX XX XXXXXXX XXXXXX XXXXX XXXXXX XXXXX XXXXXXXXX XXXXX XXXXXXXX XXX XXXXX XXXX XXX XX XXXXXXX XXXX XXXX XXXXX XXXX XXXX XXXXXXX XXXXX

Questions to ask after color blocking:

• Is the pink section (thesis) positioned well within the yellow (introduction)?
• What is the balance between orange (research) and blue (writer's voice), Does the orange overpower the blue, or is the blue overly dominant?